Wednesday, April 06, 2011

foolishness haiku

marooned and bedless
after the broken roof room -
fwoomph goes the bed spread


Jean said...

Of course this is a stunning poem.

I was thinking more "rant haiku" alomg these lines:

after the wasted drive out
speechless at your shrug
mind shouts: give me my keys, now!

Jean said...

actually I had a hard time with the last line, it originally read:
give me my motherf*&#ing keys!

you are welcome for showing you such restraint. :P